I found this to be rather depressing. (Which I assume to be the point.) I can feel her stance. However, I feel there's a lack of anguish. Forgive me for being slightly morbid. I feel it DOES deserve 4 out of 5 though. Make no mistake. That's the funny thing about poetry though, what we draw from it as a reader is different (normally) than what the wordsmith put into it.
Great job!
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