i feel your aching pain. when i read this it made me think of my grandmother who died back in 2011,until this day i still cry and think about her like it was yesterday
i remember my freshmen year of high school,it wasn't the best but i managed to get thru, and sometimes i still have bad days and i am a juinor in highschool!
i really liked this. but i seem a little confused when you said "Combing streets for a name I forgot to catch
Searching for a face not remembered
Looking for,
Nothing"???
oh my gosh, word can not describe how i feel about this poem! This is totally worth publishing,While reading the poem i could totally visualize the imagery. I really do recommend that all males should read this, then maybe the would understand why females are always mad when they say & do the exact samething to us!
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