Reading the letter and then the transitioning to milo's current action, observing the conventionally deemed, insignificant flower; the tranquil description yet contrasting with his uncertain situation was satisfying.
The complex diction change was nice too, the flow was still consistent despite the change in diction: I believe it's because the warm casualty paired with poetic detail, both evoke tranquil calmness. the casual tone switching from familiarity to meticulous observation was nice. I really like your style. The flow was consistent despite these changes. I'm speculating that the flower is some sort of symbol-- either way it was great.
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