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Review of A Limerick  Open in new Window.
Review by kflynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really like this . This is really clever . very good . the rhyme was not overpowering and didnt control the poem .
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Review by kflynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
I like this . Good break up poem . Very relatable.I love how you put questions in it .
You say you love me.
Do you think I don't see
You really aren't all that true?
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Review of broken heart  Open in new Window.
Review by kflynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
And there she did rest in pieces.
Whats that mean ^ ?

This is like a crush , that was ignored maybe...?
I think you shouldve spelled out b'cause out that would have made it better aan dmore professional i think . overall this is a really good poem
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Review of My choices  Open in new Window.
Review by kflynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.5)
i like this short little poem. its very relatable . i ask myself these similar questions sometimes.
i dont really like how this is repeated . it bothers me . i am not quite sure why. it just doesnt sound right .
To live or die?
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Review of i am  Open in new Window.
Review by kflynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
In life and everything to work out

THis line was sort of .. i dont know . I just don't think it belongs.
This over all though is a really good poem . I don't see anything else that needs to be changed .
i can relate to the loud girl part definitely .
I really like how you repeated that line .
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Review by kflynn Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (4.0)
"My heart once beat slow"

- - This line doesn't sound quite right to me , maybe make this slowly.. I'm not sure.

Overall this was well written , as I read I saw parts of it , good imagery .


"It gave you love when you proved impossible to love – "
I really like how this is worded.


It makes me wonder what this person did to make you so hurt, because i can really understand the pain in it.


The over exaggeration really made the poem to me , it made me really like it .
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