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Rated: E | (1.0)
I love this idea, so I tried my best to read this, but without punctuation it is so difficult. With some grammar help and formatting, I would love to visit this story again.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This was an entertaining read. I enjoyed the imagery, and the humor brought a smile to my face. the only problem I see is your word choice of the word "muscle." I would have chosen "muscles", or maybe rewrite the whole line in order to use the word "haunches." Thank you for this entertaining read.
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