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Review by kmacinnes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This looks like a great story, and I believe would make a great screen play for a movie or television show. You're a strong writer with good composition and balance. The story keeps me intrigued to want to keep reading, so that is a good thing. You have done a good job introducing the story in a round about way, and the dialogue feels real.

Thank you for the read.

If you have time please review the draft I have published "The Blood Rose".

All the best
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Review by kmacinnes Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
Very nice, I can relate to it because I have a two year old daughter. Thank you

Please review my post "The Blood Rose"
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