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Review of Harry and Megan  Open in new Window.
Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Hahahaha!!!! Brilliant! Well written for a short poem! So this is for a Lucky Limerick contest, huh? I love it. This is just a great poem for people who are fans of the "royal couple" other than Kate and what's-his-face. That's the whole story in one limerick. Great job!


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Review of Dear Me 2021  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I see some of these goals for Dear Me 2021 set into motion and a combination to what is happening now since everything hit the fan last year. If you practice these goals last year, then you can accomplish this year what you haven't done yet. Good job.


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Review of It Is So!  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is a very good short story about looking back on last year, which was 2020, and surviving one of the worst years that as adults had endured. With your faith in God and constant prayer, it seemed you had moved forward despite these hard times everyone in the world id going through.

Good job.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a beautifully written poem that I prefer to read than any other poem out there. I loved how you used the words and the flow of the verses that make this poem brilliant. You wrote about the elementals, which I adore by the way. This is more like a spell used for rituals than just verses. Great job!


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Review of Naked & Afraid  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
This is a good story with realistic dialogue between you and the cop that pulled you over. I enjoyed how it played out when the cop did his routine inspection with the license and the backstory on how the author was naked in the first place. Everything, including the ending, was good.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I like simple poems like this. Using what goes on at choir practice, I assume, is pretty good. I get what you're saying is what's happening during either choir or at a church function that uses a band to express the words of God or the person or band wrote about the Bible and God. Good job!


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for entry "~ He Made Me Whole ~" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
This is a good message about what is sin and what isn't and what is to open to "The Highest Power". It's a life lesson that is simple and easy to read. This is your story, but I would tone down the caps on some of the words, but that's just me. This is a good entry and I hope you win. Good luck.


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Review of Ode to Work  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Haaa! Just another day at the office, with poetry! This is great! Perfect wording, rhyming is great and very spacious between the lines! I read this and thought about my days when I was working and I had a lot of paperwork to do! I can relate to this! Great job!


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hello there ruwth, here's my review for this entry. Although I didn't read your work during the 17 list, however, I saw what you had written here and I love that you're proud of your work, your children, your grandchildren, and great-grandchildren. But I also loved that you have another family, a writing family. And closing out your entry with your work for people to read is what I liked the most. Good job.


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for entry "Life Changing " Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I just entered this too! Ha! This is a short poem that clearly explains how a person feels after he/she/them won something. The words are simple, but it gets to the point without being too complicated like using big words that sometimes people don't know. Great job!


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a brilliant short story that is fast-paced and wickedly entertaining. I loved the ending that stopped at the right moment. You knew where this was leading when the little girl went to bring down the box where she keeps her doll in. It's like that famous "Twilight Zone" episode and I know what I'm talking about. Great job!


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Review of Wheel of Fortune  Open in new Window.
for entry "December 17, 3018" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
I really enjoyed this poem. This is a very interesting piece of someone who was important to you and never taught you this, but taught you that. And I liked the noted that are full of information in case no one doesn't know what the words or references are. Very well done.


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for entry "Divine Christmas" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very simple holiday poem using prompt words given for the contest. It screams festive and I can visualize everything that associates with the words and I can taste the hot cider. It also can make a great holiday greeting card because it's so beautiful that it's marketable. Good luck.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a brilliant piece of work. If I knew what the topic was, I would say a young woman/girl struggling out of darkness of some kind. Like a demon grabbing her by the legs and not letting go. I see this persom climbing and tearing away to her freedom. Well done.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
I knew where the story was leading when they went to get pumpkins for carving. This is a modern tale that needed something other than the typical Transylvania tale, ex: vampires. As soon as I read about the quaint little town, I knew this story was taking that "tales of folklore superstitions" route and it was brilliantly done. Great job Jeff!


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I really like this ghost story. Very old-school and I really like that you used history of the date of 1848 and the details of what it used to be for that ghost girl during that time. Very brilliant suspenseful usage because you know what's going to happen. Well done, Jeff!


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Review of Food Fight  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is so cute! This could be so cute as a children's book and the characters of mood is brilliant.
“The herbs are in neutral territory!” Very funny that I laughed out loud! Fantastic story telling and usage of "puns" in each sentence. I hope you win because this is just great!


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for entry "Ho Hey" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
What you wrote is brilliant. I'm a native New Yorker and I'm still struggling to make it big, especially the city where I was born and raised. But instead of Boston or Philly to live, give me Los Angeles. This was a very interesting piece that I enjoyed with the information given. It was very well written and a good read.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is such a beautiful poem about looking to the moon's powers for their forgiveness only to be turned down. This what from what I had read. I know this is an entry for a contest but I would like to see more to express how you were really feeling to what you were writing about. Good luck.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: 18+ | (4.0)
Hi ruwth. This is very interesting to read about yourself and I like that you added the links to this poem. I have no clue about what you had to do for the contest but I guess this has to do about telling the people what you're all about. I guess you can say that this is good promotion for your other works. Thanks.


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Review by Kellie Burke Author IconMail Icon
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like a eight line poem that is simple, yet smooth rhythm with the right word usage. I like you describing the horse, how you describe how they travel and their movements. It would be a great beginning to a novel. Like the first page before the chapter or how the chapter begins with a poem or a quote. Brilliant work.


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for entry "~ Jonah ~" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Hi ruwth! This is brilliant! I love this poem and it tells a story about Jonah and the Whale. A personal favorite of mine. It tells a tale in simple form and it was very fun to read. Like a nursery rhyme! I love it so much that it should be like in a children's book for kids who don't want to read the bible but want to have a fun read! Great work!


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Review of An Apple a Day...  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
This is very interesting for the picture prompt that was used. I'm not very good with reviewing poetry but the rhythm of this piece may be a little off. Maybe it's the limited line use, or word use, or both, but this isn't bad. I'm not putting down your work I'm just saying that the last line was awkward. Thank you and keep writing.


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Review of Wheel of Fortune  Open in new Window.
for entry "July 26, 2018" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Wow! This poem speaks to me as a practitioner of Wicca and I really appreciate it! Wonderful choice of words. This is outstanding! The rhythm of the poem itself is music to my eyes. Cerridwen is a fantastic Welsh Goddess that I love next to The Morgan! Thank you so much and blessed be!


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Review of I Write In 2018  Open in new Window.
for entry "Misplaced Trust" Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
I love the conversation between a total stranger revealing that her husband has a secret account and he was gone for five days. Great wording and it reveals the story without using any big verbs. You used maybe one or two adverbs which is prefect because you can have at least two "-ly" words in my opinion. Brilliant work.


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