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Review by KelleyRay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This made me laugh! Great job! It takes some talent to tell us a story with such few words that still hits the spot! You succeeded in writing a story that was as short as possible while still telling the story thoroughly enough to make us understand it!
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
This is so beautiful!! This is moving and awe inspiring! It really captures the love put into creation! I also like how you somewhat mentioned evolution in a poem about creation. Most people would consider that to be taboo. Keep writing poems like this because you apparently have a talent for it!!


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Review by KelleyRay Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
Very moving! The flow of it could use a little improvement, but other than that it is beautiful!
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