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Review of Eternal Alliance  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I understood your meaning very well, you have great adjective, on the whole, it walks your through the fear, the wish for denial. The only thing I would encourage you to do, is check your spelling, and proof read it closely, sometimes I have to walk away come back and reread again, because sometimes even though I am reading it, I am reading the right word, not what I actually wrote.
I hope I have encourage you, and I hope by no means have I offended you
have a great day
keleka malie
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Review of Iron Ice  Open in new Window.
Rated: 13+ | (2.5)
I thought your poem has alot to say with so much truth,
I knew the road, I thought your description was on the mark, you might want to check over 'I will be by you side' or 'your side', for me some times the thoughts come so fast I think a word and type another. I hope I didn't offend you. I thought your poem was good
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