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Review of Someone  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hm. Very nice, indeed. That was extremely, how do you say it, charming. Sometimes, I have problems with stuff which plays itself irregularly, but in this case, I'll make an exception. Plus, no spelling errors! This really is fantastic! Keep up the good work, and make something else like this in the future, if you can. All in all, good show, my friend. I hope to see what you do next!


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Review of I'd Rather Be....  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Interesting. I can follow the story and how this person would rather be anywhere else then where he is. Or something like that. However, I've really got to mark it down for consistent spelling errors. That's a major problem with me. Plus, it seems a bit inconsistent in many places. But, besides that, good show, my friend! Keep up the good work.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Heh-heh. Quicksand. That was actually a pretty good poem. The rhythm was a little off, but it's forgivable. The entire story for this poem is fun, and well rehearsed. Though, how that Slinky got so far is really beyond me. It's supposed to go down steps, right? Anyway, as this was one of the better ones I've read, good show, my friend!


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Review of The Hound  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Was that haiku? Wow, my first taste. Tastes, erm, weird. But I know what it's supposed to be, and you accomplished your mission here, and more! Even though there's very little to mess up, I'm glad you spelled all of your words correctly. Misspelled words are a real turn off for me. Plus, I like dogs. Nothing wrong with that. Good show, my friend. Hope you do well in that contest!


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Review of Smooth Cats  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Aw. What a cruddy way to end such a good story. It was excellent. I'm glad you managed to set the time. It was perfect for this. There were, however, a few spelling and other assorted errors. So, I'm going to have to mark it down for that. (I really don't want to.) But the plot of the story was great. I'm still sad about how it ended. I wanted to see a happy ending for that. Oh well. It really was pretty sneaky of you to put that in. Very good show, my friend. If this is how you do things, then I can't wait to see what you do next! (Though, try to cut down on the errors. OK?)


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Review of Fire Moon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
*sigh* That was pretty. Am I getting the essence of The Book of Genesis? Well, anyway, this was beautifully written. I never once saw a writing error, and all of the paragraphs are about where they're supposed to be. Overall, I'm impressed. I really hopes this wins that contest. (Er, which ever one that is.) All in all, good show, my friend. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do next!


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Review of Walls  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hm. Very nice. I really felt that. You definitely have a future here, if you keep writing like that! Not a writing error to be seen. Plus the way that poem was put, yes, it was beautiful. Plus it rhymes! That makes it a huge win for me! All in all, good show, my friend! I'm looking forward to see what you pull off next!


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Review of GI Joe  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
...Er, what? Did he actually, kill him? Wow, just wow. That's some pretty deep stuff. The ending was a bit daft, mind. Anyway, I really didn't see anything wrong with the spelling, or anything like that. This was actually well put, as well, considering the amount of words you used. Good show, my friend. But still, wow.


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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Very nice! This certainly is a very dark poem. I enjoyed the spacing between the words, as well as the way you rhymed. I even had to look up the word "trite" to be certain what you meant. I feel this is a fantastic poem. If you make more like this, I'll definately be a fan. Very good show, my friend!


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Review of Who Am I  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Is this one of those spacing poems? I never really got used to those. Anyway, the message behind this is a little vague. Are we talking about the narrator's face being reflected in the mirror and the surprise of the things that have happened? Or is it a stranger, to which the narrator is looking at through the mirror. I don't really get it. Besides that, I do not see any spelling errors, which is good. Fairly good show, my friend. Not spectacular, by any means, but good show, nonetheless.


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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well, I understand that there's only a little you could do with 100 words, but this was excellent. It had a little bit more depth than what I had expected. Plus, there aren't any spelling errors. The only problem I had was a personal one. Watching someone die, especially a friend, is definitely a reason to shoot the one who killed him. It was chilling, and yet, thrilling. Good show, my friend.


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Review of Calypso  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Being a fan of Greek myths, I found this story very well informed. Not entirely, though, since it easily could've mentioned the fact that she's the daughter of the Titan Prometheus, but it only said she was the daughter of a Titan. No specifics. But I'm not gonna beat it up just because of that.

However, there were a couple of problems with the story itself. I found a few spelling errors, but those are small potatoes compared to the random multiple spaces in between certain sentences. That really brought the quality of the story down for me. But the overall story was very satisfactory for me. All in all, very good show!


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Review of Dean  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Sweet. Very sweet. The narrator obviously has feelings for Dean, and is in love with every bit of him. I know for a fact that someone like that would be an OK guy in my book. However, I have some problems with the poem itself. Specifically, the extra lines that were added. It really disrupts the flow of the poem when that is done and, in the case of the second to last line, is totally unnecessary. A very good one, nonetheless. Good show.


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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
Very nice. I liked the general idea of the story and the way it describe everyone being involved in some type of conspiracy. I also enjoyed the way you described the combat. It was very well put, and only slightly vague. In various areas, however, I wasn't able to follow precisely, but it made up for it in the long run. There were only a few spelling errors, which tend to make me nervous about anything in particular, but overall, this is a fantastic story. What I'm hoping for now is another story continuing this one. All in all, very good show, my man.


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Review of Fly  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Well, um, that was nice, I guess. Anyway, you're poem is very good. It's not the best I've seen, but it's better than others. So, it's about average. The haunting way the story portrays itself, as well as the chilling way it ended, is a poem for people who, er, like poem about people committing suicide. However, I had some trouble with a couple of them not exactly rhyming, but it's just a problem that I have. Good show, my friend.


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Review of Icey Giant  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
Okay, to be honest, I did not like that at all. The poem was extremely short, and what was there didn't even rhyme. Just because something sounds somewhat similar, doesn't mean it rhymes. I did not get the point to the entire thing, and even though this poem was, as previously stated, incredibly short, it was full of spelling errors. Even the title is misspelled. In all honesty, this was a very poor show.


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Review of TIMMY  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This poem makes me think back to my wonderful memories I had as a child. Very nice. Although, I'm a bit uncertain what the fourth paragraph is supposed to imply. Just what did Timmy name exactly? Also, there's the spelling errors. (Most notably in the second paragraph.) Like I said, very nice, but it needs work.


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Review of The Ghost Girl  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Very nice. This could easily go down as a classic, in my book anyways. This is a classic tale, I believe it is known as a "Ghost Hitchhiker story", where someone picks up a person on the road, just to turn around to find that that person has disappeared. Sometimes, they still have their seat-belts on. All in all, this story was well written, the rhymes were great, and the general feel is eerie. Good show, indeed!


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Review of Crashed Witches  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This story was thoroughly enjoyable. Honestly, I don't pay attention to those figures, but now I don't think I'll look at them the same way again. A very good job with the spelling and punctuation. It would be a perfect Halloween bedtime story, except for the part where the storyteller says he bedded an ancestor of the Earl. Still, very good show!


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Review of Sisters  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
This is a great madlib. After I finished inserting my words, I was rolling on the floor laughing. The only part I didn't laugh at was my fault in the way of a misunderstanding of what an adverb is.
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Review of Here Be Dragon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
An impressive story that was well written, had a solid storyline and included pretty good characters. Though, I'm don't really see any reason why Alex would be named Fluffy, or even why she'd suggest being a pet to the dragon. (Though she was drunk at the time.) Overall, not bad.


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Review of Slobby pokemon  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
An intriguing Interactive Story (to which, I have personally added to) that really will be immortal with fans of WG and Pokémon!
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