This is beautiful! The imagery is sublime!
It reminds me of hiking in the Smokies, following the trails by the streams and rivers,and seeing the antique front of an old cabin peeking through the trees. You can just imagine the quiet bustle of wagons and horses and mothers busy with cooking and canning and mending. It almost feels like your trespassing; like a time worn farmer will come walking up through the woods from the river and demand why you are on his land. It's a wondreful feeling you've captured. It sends my imagination soaring!
Being a coffee drinker myself, I, of course, find this poem very amusing. Great imagery and word choice! I thinks it's wonderful that you can make a poem abaout anything, even coffee!
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