I love your poem. Because of your words you used, the description. And the emotional feeling it gives me. I can relate to this very well and as soon as i read this i thought to myself how much it made me think of what i'm going through. It's very down to the point and that's a great thing about it too.
Are you goingto kill the person or people who made you feel that way? because thats what i got out of this. And if its not what your trying to say then you should be more detailed with this. (:
It's very common for someone to feel like this. So they're will be many people who will just fall in love with this poem. I fell in love with it just bc it was sweet and understanding. And i love your word choice.
This was very well written, and a good choice of words. And there is really good detail in it. But you need to change was, into were. In the last line. (;
I love this poem, It completly shows that whoever wrote this if it was coming from your heart you adore a girl with green eyes. And i like the ending, how you made sure the reader knows that her green eyes can't be ignored.
I absolutly love this. It reminds me of something i've read before. But then agian it's so unique. It really makes you think about life, and what you would do if that happened.
This poem is kind of disturbing, but if i was a gangster i would like it. therefore i'm not a gangster so i really don't care for it. but i like the title.
I'm sure anyone who has been or is in love could relate to that, and if someone reads this that doesnt know how it feels this would give them an idea of how it feels. Anywhoo This is a very good, well worded poem and i enjoyed reading this.
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