I like this one.Willow trees are my favorite trees of all time.I really like how you did this in all lowercase letters.It makes it seem gentler and more flowing like a willow tree.Lines 13 & 14 don't seem to fit in with the rest of the poem. My review has been submitted for consideration in "Good Deeds Go Noticed" .
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