I think that would be a great idea if only someone could make it happen. all in all, a really freat fiction story with very well structured paragraphs and sentences! your writing flows together very well. just try and make the story a little more interesting next time. Keep on doing what you do and remember: NEVER STOP WRITING!!!
oh my goodness! please, please, please, please, please, please, PLEASE write more!!! This story left me yearning to know what happens next! If you write more stories like this one I promise I will read them all!!! when you write more send me an email letting me know and I promise I will read them as soon as I know!!
oh my goodness! what a beautiful story!!! I swear that the couple is so sweet that they gave me a toothache!plus that story made me want to sob when I read the ending! please tell me that you have more stories just like this one because if you do I will read them all!!!
oh my god, I love this story... does she suffer from a mental illness? cuz the way her thoughts are patterned seems to point me in that direction... also...do you have any more stories like this one? because i'd be really interested in reading them if you do...
umm...i am very confused by this story..it just had so much going on that i didn't have a clue where to direct my focus! nonetheless, it was still a very well written story and i would very much like to read more like this,
well...although rather simple it is a quite intriguing story. I only wish that it was just a little bit longer. nonetheless a satisfying read for when you are bored. I do have a question though... is this fiction or nonfiction? Like did you really have that dream or not?
my goodness...this was a very creative and well thought out work of literature! I love the way it gives insight into what it would be like to be a yard decoration. I have never read anything quite like this before! I think you have a real talent and a wonderful imagination! please.. never stop writing!!!!
VERY beautiful!!! This poem feels like you poured a little heart and soul into it! However, I think you spelt "ice cycles" wrong... I believe it is spelled "icicles". Also, No offense, but I would have liked it to rhyme just a bit. There's nothing wrong with a poem that doesn't rhyme! It's just that my preference is for them to rhyme a little. Anyway, LOVELY poem!!!!
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