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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Wow! I never thought a short story about a train would be so interesting! I find anything wrong with the work and can only say the story really drew me in. I was surprised to find out that Lily was actually a dog, I thought it was a deranged woman, haha. It was amusing to hear about the Ilene's (is that how you spell it) brother's love for her fiance. The ending was surprising, I never thought they would all die! ;)
A really great peice of work and I can't think of any helpful tips, it's too good. Really worth the five stars!

~Karida
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