You miss your friend.
they are someone who you cant forget
Its like something that connects you physically as well as spiritually.
that was beautiful.
This is why i enjoy comming to this website because there are people like you who are creative and write articles that are innately on a deeper level than most other writing. keep up the good work!
This reminded me of the first poem that I've ever reviewed. I love the freedom themes in writing. Your writing put a vivid picture in my head in its 3 short lines. As far as I can tell its perfect, but then again its only 3 lines lol. The only advice I can give is to write more! I would love to see some longer work of yours (if you don't already have some)
I really like the juxtaposition of the face with the eyes against heaven and hell. you really put an image in my head and hooked me into the story. The only problem that I could possibly have with this is the color of the text but that's just a personal preference of mine that has nothing to do with the content of your writing lol. Keep up the good work
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