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I'm the lead editor for a small independent press, but I am on maternity leave for the next several years and thus not accepting submissions. I'll tell you my professional opinion on first chapters or short pieces and whether I would have accepted it or rejected it if I was looking for work. I've dealt most with controversial speculative fiction, and I'm most interested in polyamory a.k.a consensual non-monogamy.
Favorite Genres
Science Fiction, Historical Fiction, Fantasy, Romance, Dystopia, Erotica
Least Favorite Genres
stream of consciousness
Favorite Item Types
Short Stories, Novels, Fraternal Polyandry
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Review of Running  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This brings back strong memories of intense love for me. I was just thinking today of the person who showed me I could love again after I was devastated by my first love. My second love was short, but having a taste of love again in someone else was the thing I needed most to move on.

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Review of Trfyddhdj  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (1.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Is this meant to be a test piece or a placeholder? I recommend drafting your story in a separate program such as MS Word, Open Office, or Google Docs and then copying and pasting it when you are ready to share it.

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Review of LONLEY bucket  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This provides a lot of food for thought. Thanks for giving my mind something to chew on. My only complaint is that it ends mid-sentence.

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Review of False Reality  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for bringing these images to my mind.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of WITTY BANTER  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a very entertaining exchange. Thank you for injecting some drama into my otherwise dull day.

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Review of I Blame  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of Gargoyle in Love  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I love stories from non-human perspectives like this. It helps me to have more gratitude for my human life. The writing here was absolutely beautiful, and I'm glad they had a happy ending.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a solid premise. It's not my cup of tea, but I am glad you are writing about what inspires you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You’ve painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you. I love how the relationship between father and son is portrayed, and the environmentalist message strikes a chord in my heart.

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Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This reminds me a lot of my feelings for my first love. I still feel that way about him after more than a decade. My therapist said to embrace it. My first love was in 2007-2008, and then I had PTSD from an abusive relationship from 2009-2014.

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Review of The Painting  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is a great start! Keep up the hard work, and I am sure you will weave a magnificent tale.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This was a lovely read. I had a good idea of what was going on because I'm somewhat familiar with the fandom.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: 18+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You’ve painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of Million Questions  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've covered some very powerful emotions here. Thank you for sharing.

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Review of But I'm Not  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for sharing these deeply personal thoughts. Writing about these things is a great way to process your feelings and let others who have had similar experiences know they are not alone.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
I am also running a contest in case you are interested:
 
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Review of The Map's Pact  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You’ve painted a vivid picture with your words. Thank you for taking me on this journey with you.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

You've painted a beautiful picture with your words. I noticed some grammar issues, though. For proofreading purposes, I recommend using a tts (text-to-speech) program. It is easy to find free ones on the internet, though the amount of text you can input at once is limited unless you upgrade to premium options.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

Thank you for the reminder. I'm incredibly worried about the fate of our planet and do not drive because of that. It's good to know that someone out there also cares.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

I used my internet browser to translate this to English, so I will not comment on the grammar.

As someone who is deeply saddened by the U.S. election results, I's struck by "Money becomes a status symbol in society, along with looks. A person's character increasingly fades into the background and is taken less seriously." Money is the root of all evil, when a person has too much of it.

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Review of Duxton Dental  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

This is handy information. It could be even more compelling if you told a story about someone who used these tips.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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Review of First time  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Welcome! I stumbled upon your work through the “read a newbie” feature.

As far as introductions go, this could use more substance. Talk about what made you decide to join the site or something like that.

Happy writing, and I hope you enjoy it here!
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