nicely written poem of struggles and trying to get ahead and not loose yourself. thought provoking for sure. keep writing and keep sharing. I liked your poem.
Liked your poem, vision provokng. started out with good flow and rhyme and towards the last couple of stanzas it got lost.but keep writing and sharing. great potential!!
A good thoughtful poem that many have experienced and will be able to relate to. One small suggestion: compile your poem to an audience instead of naming to one individual unless this is for him only.
keep writing!!
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