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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Would love to see the continuation and see where this leads. There seems to be a lot of possibilities, but I think that it is hard to see where the characters stand and who they really are. I hope that you will introduce each character a little more in your continuation so that a connection is felt with some of them.
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