This story is very mysterious. It is written well. It would be much better if it included more descriptions; what do the characters look like, what is in the room, etc. Overall it is interesting, it just could use a little more descriptions.
"Gray House" is action-filled and captures the reader's interest after a few lines. The writer's style is excellent, and each scene is described very well. As you continue to read it, you start to feel more and more like you are in the story and that it is really happening. The author did a wonderful job of making an unrealistic thing seem as though it could happen!
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