this has so much power in it! it is quite incredible! well written and flows so nicely I love the last two lines "And everyone will see... That I can too be mean." that speaks such volumes, it blew me away with the strength in your righting, very well written!!!
This is tragically beautiful, this hit me hard and I am at a loss for words, the rhythm and melody to this poetry was beyond anything I have read, I felt such emotion and it was amazing. this was an inspiration to me, it is positively incredible. your poem is a work of art, that I will read over and over. Thank you for creating such an amazing peace.
this is such a fascinating righting style and it is amazing how all the words fit so well together! "Who borrow the brains of burdened busybodies..." I love this line. the righting is so full of rhythm and makes your brain work. this was a fun read and made me really think too, it is not easy to make those two things happen in one peace of art. Very well written!
This is one of the best peace of righting I have ever had the privilege to read! You are an amazingly gifted righter and an inspiration! This is positively astounding, the flow and beauty of this is truly magnificent!
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