"Larry W."
I love your poem. I like the way it rhymes and fits the guy perfectly. You did a very good job! Your comparisons are very well thought out & make perfect sense. The random question and answer is pretty funny. Maybe you could se better words and more details.
Your tenses seem to change a lot. You sound as if you have the desire to become a great journalist. It is really hard to put information out about yourself and what you plan to do because you don't want to be criticized, I give you kudos for that. My favorite part of this self -letter is that you're saying to keep your spirits high no matter what brings you down. Good work & keep writing- it will pay off.
Printed from https://writing.com/main/profile/reviews/jtart
All Writing.Com images are copyrighted and may not be copied / modified in any way. All other brand names & trademarks are owned by their respective companies.
Generated in 0.07 seconds at 3:33am on Nov 27, 2024 via server WEBX1.
View Portfolio
Visit Notebook
Send Gift Points
Awards
Badges
Send Email
Community Newsfeed
General Discussion
Sponsored Items
Book of Trinkets
Static Items
Books
Groups
Interactive Stories
Audio
Campfire Creatives
Community Notes
Crossword Puzzles
Documents
Folders
Images
In & Outs
Madlibs
Photo Albums
Polls
Product Reviews
Quizzes
Survey Forms
Web Pages
Word Searches
