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Review of Baked Potato  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This sounds like a great recipe idea. I am going to try it the next time the wife and I make baked potatoes.

The only error or typing issue was: Either pierce each potato several, or use a tool like this:

I think you should place the word "times" after several. Other than that, great article and recipe.

Thank you, Jef Sturgeon


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Review of Reviewing ideas  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Hi Maryann,

Thank you for the wonderful article on creating a review template. I will work on that to ensure there is consistency in all of my reviews.

I will check to see if there are different types of review template due to my reviewing different types.

Have a great day and thank you. Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a great article, you articulated it well. I never thought cough syrup could capture my imagination like your article did. I really appreciate that!

I didn't find any spelling errors or anything grammatical.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of The Snapdragon  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a beautiful and well presented poem. You brought the Snap dragon to life in a vivid and realistic way. To do this in 15 lines was fantastic.

I appreciate the effort and thank you for your poem. I am rating this 5 stars.

Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I have to say, you have one amazing imagination! That was a very unique story and I rather enjoyed it. Let's just hope no woman shrinks like that, lol.

The thought and care that went into this piece was truly remarkable, kudo's on that. I am rating this 5 stars for the pure genius behind the piece.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a well though out piece of poetry, I did enjoy some of the rhyming sequences and would love to read the original. Sarcasm and humor would be a great addition to this.

Overall I am rating this 5 stars and hope to read more.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Priceless  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This was good poem, not to sure on the rhyming sequence but overall it was spot on for today's economy.

The flow was a little difficult at times and I had to go back to reread, that does happen at times but just one of the things I point out.

Overall I am rating this 4 stars.

Keep writing. Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Lago's Betrayal  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
I enjoyed the theme of the piece, and how it was well thought out. Th pacing was spot on and each line added depth to the piece as well.

The rhyming sequence was nicely placed. I am rating this 5 stars overall.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
What a sad but fantastic piece of writing. The topic is sad but the way you put this together and the thought is what drew into the theme.

Each stanza was powerful and added to the piece. Awesome work.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW, those sound delicious and I am looking forward to making them. I also prefer to utilize bread crumbs instead of panko on numerous recipes.

Panko does serve a purpose but I can see that this isn't one of them. I like the addition of other sauces, that will give everyone a variety.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Thank you for the great information. I used Amazon/Kindle for my first book "Ghost Peppers" and you're correct, It was difficult. I had my 28 year old daughter help me which made the process easier.

I found a college student who was ready to graduate in the publishing and editing field and she did a great job on my book. For me that served two purposes; the first was it was inexpensive, $150 for the entire manuscript and second, she referred it to friends and family. She just finished with my second book and I look forward to working with her.

How did you go about getting it on Barnes & Noble Online? Any help in that quest would be greatly appreciated.

Again, thank you for your insight! Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
The topic was very true in todays society. I enjoyed the tempo and felt you put a lot of thought and effort into this.

My only concern was the lack of any punctuation, unless of course that was your choice.

I am rating this 5 stars overall and hope you continue writing important themes like you did.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
WOW! That was a very powerful set of words, feelings and thoughts. I felt it was well constructed and each stanza was clear and concise.

My only issue and this is my opinion only, I had a difficult time with the font. Besides that, very well written and thought out.

I am giving you 5 stars, you've certainly have earned those!

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Atlanta Pride  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a great poem, I thoroughly enjoyed the history lesson laid out so uniquely in this piece.

I enjoyed the rhyming sequences that you had laid out throughout the poem.

The only grammatical or spelling error I found was in this line: "!996 US Olympics, Amb. & Mayor Andrew Young." Is the ! a mistake? If not then please disregard.

I rate this 5 stars and appreciate all of the hard work and planning that had to go into this poem

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a very well written and thought out poem. I could feel the love and encouragement in every verse.

The rhyming sequences were very well done. The only exception was this verse: "Unique in our values, two partners’ paid dues" which doesn't rhyme.

I still an rating this 5 stars. I appreciate the entire poem and the hard work that must have went into this.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That was a very powerful message and a great piece of poetry.

I liked how you pieced the theme throughout the piece, each stanza conveying the message so eloquently.

Hope that hasn’t happened to you.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review of Writing.Com 101  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Can I use my GP’s towards renewing my membership?

Thank you
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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
That was a great story, erotic but very clean and respectful.

I didn’t anticipate Cassie would be modeling and then her giving those pictures to Darren, great twist.

Punctuation looked solid and I didn’t see any grammatical issues.

Thank you for a great read. Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
The poem, in my humble opinion was perfectly laid out and the 4 sets of words were used beautifully.

The rhyming sequence was spot on and was wonderful to hear when I read it out loud.

This was a fantastic poem overall and I wish you success in all future writing.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon


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Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Great piece of writing and a sad but encouraging story.

Hope all is well now and thank you so much for sharing!

Jeff Sturgeon
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Review of The Quills  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Here is my donation! By the way, is it possible to see how this years voting is going? Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon

RE: my book “Ghost Peppers” has been nominated.
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Review of A Note To Pray  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
This was a well thought out piece of poetry. The rhyming sequence was spot on.

I enjoyed the message and theme of the poem and felt it appropriate for the times we are in

Thank you again for a fantastic piece of writing.
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Review of Sarah Ebon  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | N/A (Review only item.)
I enjoyed the rhyming sequence and thought you did a great job with that.

The use of fantasy characters like dwarves and elves was an added touch which did surprise me, in a good way.

Overall this was an excellent piece of poetry.

Thank you
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Review of Lost  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
That is hilarious!!! Never saw that coming. What a great concept and well thought out.

Please continue writing these great short pieces! They will surely make people’s day.

Thank you, Jeff Sturgeon
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Review of Crystal Painting  Open in new Window.
Review by Jeff Sturgeon Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | N/A (Review only item.)
That was not just beautiful and thoughtful, it clearly painted a brilliant picture in my mind. Not many poems have done that for me so amazing work there.

I enjoyed the theme, the read and appreciate the effort you must have put into creating this brilliant piece of poetry.

Thank you


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