Great read - your interview felt real. I liked the dialogue and the emotions behind Neil's responses. I got the sense that he felt the interviewer was a jack-ass and felt the work he was doing today was much more important that what was said forty years ago.
I don't know...I could be wrong...just an impression.
I got goosebumps. This is beautiful. The characters and emotions are believable. I am new at reviewing so be patient as I try to tell you why this is flawless.
I like it. I enjoyed your humor and your suspense. I am looking forward to reading more.
Just change the following typos and it will be good to go.
inconvenient - inconvenience
tried - cried
Love your story. I can see the love for your pooch. I just noticed one error. It is a common one - change add to ad. "So I searched the Internet and found an add"
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