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Review of Nurturing Blossom  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
Awesome Perfect words for writers as well as other artists
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Beautifully written, nice imagery, makes me feel closer to God! Good luck
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Review of The Shirt  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
sad, well written I feel the loss. You left me wanting more. Well done
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Review of Need to Be Free  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Very good with the feel. You may want to do a bit w/ "freedom seem (s) to not be on your side" & "clutch to my life but all (I) find is night" Or maybe "I clutch to my life" slipping in the night "Darkness overtaking me." These are just some ideas. I like the power in this piece. Keep writing I'll be back for more.
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Review of Tears of a clown  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Well done! Deep sentiment, nice flow. I'll be back to get more from you.
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Review of Even in Dreams  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
I really like this piece. You might consider not using the word "seems" quite so much. Maybe; "So very real, but should I believe"? Your thoughts run smoothe. All & all a nice piece
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Review of Beloved  Open in new Window.
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Rated: ASR | (4.5)
Wow! This absolute. The images are wonderful.It bids me come dance as well. I so enjoy the read. Some gramatical slips but overall a wonderous, dreamy, find. If you received only an honorable mention I wish I could've read the winners' work! I hope to see more of your work. I will add you to my favs. Thank you for the blessing you gave.
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Review of For My Boys  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I really like this. I think couplets or stanzas might be better for the lengthier poems. Write more please
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Review of The Telling  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (5.0)
The loss of a child is always so difficult. I totally feel your pain. I too have lost my wonderful angel to the heavens. God bless you. Your writting is superb. Every sentence left a wound on my heart. Well done Keep the Flow comming; we want more!
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Review of Shadow  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (3.0)
Dear Kage: I enjoyed your story. I'd like to read more. I would sugest fixing the small spelling & gram. things. A short story of this nature is not something I usually read. If you write it I'll come back for more. I hope you keep writing. the basics are good. So is the story.
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Rated: ASR | (3.5)
Daer Creative: Wow! Painful. I understand the retreat & the anger. Good work
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Review of gratitude  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
Sounds like your life has changed. Your poem is real. I felt your flow was not consistant, but the meaning was pointed out very clear.
Keep writing! The more you write the more we get from your work. Someone told me that I shouldn't use all caps.. It's like yelling. I haven't had the time to edit mine yet. Just passing along the info..
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Review of sinful man  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
Quite interesting. Thankyou for your work.
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