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Thank you for entertaining me with a Limerick. The poetry form is short, simple, rhythmic, and very good. One of my favorite poetry types.
I feel sorry for Bob, believing everything he read. He must have read some serious stuff, and in the end he couldn't find the truth, and choked on an eraser that he wish he could use so badly to get stuff out of his mind.
I'm left with the sense your dreams are different than the average person.
I recall a dream I had once, of business store fronts. Their names were very vivid, other than that one dream, I don't read much in my dreams.
The basic impression I get is reading became a living objective in the auther's life, starting in infancy. The first three years of a child's life are the most important years of development. You are lucky to have loving parents.
If you dream of lotto tickets, would you write the numbers down?
First of all, you shouldn't have to write about the dog's stupidity. Every other person knows a dog has the intelligence of a three year old. Some dogs are actually very intelligent. A Boxer for example. Did you know a Boxer is a very sociable dog? How do you think she got elected to California in the first place? You may want to be more descriptive with the dog's breed.
Haha ... Guess the youth potion worked! Great ending to the story. Too bad most the story centers around grandpa Martose's letter. Your story is very creative, would have liked to read more (in the sense of plot involving the characters of the story)
The way you wrote this story tells me this Jake guy is abusive. An abusive boyfriend? The story is rather gruesom, leaving me wondering what kind of damage to the Sarah character there was. I saw the date at the top of the story's title. This story is from 2009. What contest was this story written for?
Your poem is great! Rhymes really well and the topic is expressed perfectly. It is a prayer to bless a fire truck and all the firefighters. Mostly, the firefighters. The photo with the poem accents the piece very well. How long did it take for you to write this poem?
The poem makes sense. Poems don't have to rhyme, it would have been great to read this poem as a rhyming poem. Reading the poem makes me wonder what it would be like to have a twin, you didn't really address that in your poem. The verse I liked best was "with matching suits of red"
They do appear to be happy in the photo of the apples. The photo goes really well with your poem. I could practically taste the carmel apples with the words you used in you poem. What a color to use, red.... makes sense, because most apples are red. Love the last line because of the stereo type apples have concerning worms. Did you get the photo of the apples first, and then write the poem... write the poem and then be lucky enough to find a photo of candied apples?
Your lyrics sound like a country music tune. It is alright. Like the verse "Don’t buy me jewelry after you hit me" ... Some people are jerks and by the tone of the lyrics, the singer sounds like they've found one.It sounds like the singer of the song you wrote is dealing with someone who doesn't know themselves.
Your story is very detailed. Seems to me, every momment is written. Who is he? I don't recall reading his name in your story. I liked the portion of the story when he is at the airport.Gave me the impression of actualy being there. You're very detailed in your writting, a good trait for a writter. I may read some of the items in your port soon.
You wrote " The .45 caliber shell tore through " ... A shell is what holds the bullet and is expelled through the gun's chamber when fired. Your short 300 word story is ok. Have you heard of the 300 word fiction contest on writing.com?
I like your poem. Simple and to the point! The bible is truly full of great advice for a peaceful life. I like 1 cor 12:4 ... Gives a great definition of what true love is.
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