The title begged for a review. This is a very charming piece, richly described and craftily executed -- a stand out for originality, wit and over all enjoyment largely due to your distinct voice. There were no issues with the mechanics that gave me pause, and if there are typo's I did not notice them. I was able to read this with confidence in your skill. Nice!
Love the title! Great descriptions! The scenes are natural, layered and full of tension, with dollops of humor like merengue on a lemon pie. Count me a fan.
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