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Review of Guardian Angel  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
Wow, I found this a very interesting read. Having a younger brother myself, I can identify with the need to protect him - I've don it all my life.

It was a unique way to communicate this feeling and message, having the older sister already dead. It was a touching and beautiful short story that I truly enjoyed.

Keep up the excellent work!

Joy
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Review of Thinking of You  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Congrats on writing such a touching song for those fighting in Iraq. I enjoyed reading your song and only wish that there was a way I could hear the music as well.

I love the phrase "until it feels like yesterday," since I find that it communicates such a deep thought and meaningful emotion.

Keep up the great work!

Joy
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Review of quo vadis?  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.0)
This is very unique. I always enjoy reading works that are out of the ordinary, and I definitely enjoyed this one. I agree with the point that you are making, and I think that the unique style of your poem actually helps to drive your point home.

Great job on this. Keep up the great work.

Joy
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Review of ONE  Open in new Window.
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Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
I cannot find one thing that I think you should do different with this poem. It is outstanding. I remember exactly where I was on 9-11 when the attacks occured, and you brought those memories all flooding back.

Your words are strong and beautiful, and this is a wonderful tribute to America and all that was suffered on that day. I especially like how you speak of America's "Zest."

Personally, this is one of the best poems I've reviewed to date! Great job and I look forward to reading more from you!!!

Joy
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Review of don't go  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
I love the emotion of the poem and the way that you communicated it to me with colorful words. The only thing I saw that you may want to change is near the end where you only had a 3 line rhyme instead of four like the rest of the poem.

I think that making that four lines as well will help you improve the way the poem flows. Otherwise I felt it was wonderful and a read that definitely touched my heart.

Keep up the excellent work!!!

Joy
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Review by Joy Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Simple. Beautiful. To the point! This is an excellent poem. It was stark in the feelings it portrayed, and you definitely stopped in a good place. Many people feel they need to go on and on to portray a point, but you definitely got your point across with few words.

I enjoyed reading this poem. Excellen job. Keep up the great work!

Joy
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Review of Looking Back  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
It is indeed difficult to lose a loved one. You portray that feeling with excellent words, taking me back to that feeling once again.

I love your word choice and the imagery throughout the poem. Lovely work. Be sure to keep up the great work here.

Joy
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Rated: E | (4.5)
Hi,

I'm new here to the site and I'm learning my way around. This article definitely provided me with the answers to the questions I had concerning the review process.

Not only did you give me the answers I needed, but you did it in a very concise and interesting way. Thanks for the help and Great Job!

Joy
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