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Review of Trick or Tweet  Open in new Window.
Review by James McItyre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great story, I could not stop reading and was very sad when it ended. I loved every bit of it, this: 'John Bauer. My NetLink number is 635769-22-1. Today, I “celebrate” my forty-second birthday. At least that’s what we used to say. Birthdays haven't been honored lately. I'm not looking for sympathy. I'm only documenting what’s happened to me and my family.' was a good enter to a brilliant story
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Review by James McItyre Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (5.0)
This is a great reviews that realy captures the imagination of the reader, I would reccomend getting this out to a publisher as it has potential. I like it, I may print this out and keep it for reading. Also the first line realy grabbed me in, ' The bottom-shelf liquor bit at Jymile’s mouth and the harsh taste blistered his tongue with unpleasant sensations as it carved a path to his stomach. He avoided the liquid’s aroma and took hurried gulps to absorb the fluid into his body with as little hurt as possible.' A work of art.
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