jmcverzola's (jmcverzola) Reviews

Absolutely beautiful sonnet!

"Awake, I find her taste, her touch, remain
to tempt me back into her realm again."

I really love the ending! This must be the winner! Congratz!~

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Review of Too Much is Never Enough

Review by jmcverzola

Rated: E

| (4.5)

I'm just wondering why you used the words "it".

I believed your "it" pertains to time.

How about trying to use "She" instead of "it"?

Please dont take this personally, I'm just verbalizing my own opinion. I mean no offense.

The poem indeed is great! The message is fully conveyed.

Time is gold; and we have to use it wisely for it comes only once!

Nice write!

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#3489699

Review of Slipped Away

Review by jmcverzola

Rated: E

| (5.0)

Wow! I feel the contentment in this poem!
I believed that this was written with the emotion of gladness
for the soft traveling in pace of time.

"The heavy clouds of winter hung
above a tiny tree"

"Now the tree has grown it seems,
the clouds are ashen gray"

I can feel the transition in those lines!

Short but meaningful poem!
I Love it!

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#3489193

Review of Sugar, The Love Affair Must End

Review by jmcverzola

Rated: ASR

| (5.0)

Wow! A simple sugar that transcends its simplicity!

I love the imagery, the style and the last two sentence! I mean the whole poem rather!

This poem is amazing! I can safely say that it speaks more than the sugar!
Sometimes, we really need to give up for our own good!

Nice write!

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#3483105

Review of THE ROAD OF LIFE: a sonnet—Editor’s pick

Review by jmcverzola

Rated: E

| (5.0)

"Good intentions alone are not enough.
We must pursue the road of life, though rough."

This two-line ending the poem are indeed powerful.
I believed that it captures all what has been said from the beginning.
I must also say that, the road of life can only be taken once and for sure,
we can never amend once we've passed on it.

Very nice poem that point out the importance of going always to the right path.