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Review by jmcverzola Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
This is absolutely reflective!
And I do looks for someone like her too! LOL
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Review of The Number Nine  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (4.5)
I am just curious...is your next favorite number is six? LOL!

Peace!!!
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Review of Caress  Open in new Window.
Review by jmcverzola Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Absolutely beautiful sonnet!

"Awake, I find her taste, her touch, remain
to tempt me back into her realm again."

I really love the ending! This must be the winner! Congratz!~
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Review by jmcverzola Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.5)
I'm just wondering why you used the words "it".

I believed your "it" pertains to time.

How about trying to use "She" instead of "it"?

Please dont take this personally, I'm just verbalizing my own opinion. I mean no offense.

The poem indeed is great! The message is fully conveyed.

Time is gold; and we have to use it wisely for it comes only once!

Nice write!
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Review of Slipped Away  Open in new Window.
Review by jmcverzola Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (5.0)
Wow! I feel the contentment in this poem!
I believed that this was written with the emotion of gladness
for the soft traveling in pace of time.

"The heavy clouds of winter hung
above a tiny tree"

"Now the tree has grown it seems,
the clouds are ashen gray"

I can feel the transition in those lines!

Short but meaningful poem!
I Love it!
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Review by jmcverzola Author IconMail Icon
Rated: ASR | (5.0)
Wow! A simple sugar that transcends its simplicity!

I love the imagery, the style and the last two sentence! I mean the whole poem rather! *Wink*

This poem is amazing! I can safely say that it speaks more than the sugar!
Sometimes, we really need to give up for our own good!

Nice write!
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