Wow, what a story. This had me glued to my chair leaning closer to the computer screen and wanting to know what happened. Your descriptions of the scenes were vivid and visual images. I could see the trees, and hear the skeeters buzzing about his face. Simply incredible and wonderfully well written. Sweet Musings
I would love to know when you finish this story. Well done.
Wow, nicely done. I love the way you are using all five senses and the verbal images you are creating. Although I am a little confused about the part where you say the French wiped New York out and that Paris was hit too. I haven't read the rest of your chapters so you may explain this in later on. Very well done, I can't wait to hit the rest of your chapters. Sweet Musings
Bravo, this is a well written and thought provking story. It is an interesting concept and even more heart grasping thought. I like the way you mix humor with serious issues. This a well written story and more thought provoking than most of the stories, articles or poems that I have read. I applaud you and your writing skills. Bravo, Sweet Musings
You have a great start. A good hook to pull your reader in and keep their attention with the battle scene action. Its very well written and the dream sequences are just enough to give the reader a taste but still not understand exactly what is going on. Very well done and I eagerly await the rest of it.
Best of luck on your writing. Sweet Musings
Wow, this is an incredible and wonderful story. Well written and full of detail and imagination. Wow, I hope you win the contest bc this entry deserves it.
Good Luck,
Sweet Musings
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