this poem was gripping and led the reader on emotional journey into one woman's pain. It is very sad in this society that women are still treated like second class citizens. The picture you create with the distraught lover kneeling on a grave. This is a very well writen and chilling poem. Hopefully someone will read it and remember to truly include their lover into their life.
This was a amazing poem. Not enough people show empathy to those who have nothing. It is even in this country of billionaires, children go hungry. These type of poems are very important to help others understand how and maybe even have compassion. Thank you for sharing.
This poem was good at getting the point accross about the rhythm and that is all I really got from it. Didn't do much more than that. Yet I did appreciate the word play always a plus.
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