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Review of the other side  Open in new Window.
Review by Jimmy Tinsley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (3.5)
I really enjoyed the tone of this story it bounces along nicely.

I feel the descriptions of the events could be expanded a little more for comic effect.

The ending is interesting and I like the references to fairy tales and nursery rhymes.

well done :)
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Review of The Neighbour  Open in new Window.
Review by Jimmy Tinsley Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
I really liked this, it is a gripping short story that kept me interested to the end. I really liked the twist at the end with the dead dog. It had some echos of Psycho in there.

Thanks for the tension.

Jimmy
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