Amazing!!!! I really like your story-telling, besides, the story is also very, very interesting, keep it up like this and you'll get really far, I'll check out your portfolio :) I would say to you to read my portfolio, but my stuff doesn't match up to yours, so I'll have to get better to surpass you ;) Take care and Write on!
sincerely
Jiggypepper
It's okay, I like the way you narrate the story and all, it's good, but the cliffhanger you put in it kinda doesn't fit, and it isn't my type of story but to be honest you have anice writing skills in my opinion, keep up the good work and If you can check out my stories, take care :)
It's mm good, a little fixes over here and over there, and it could turn out to be quite good, besides I'll also read the remaining chapters you have written, I'm new so I only have one story and it's not fiction but the rest of my stories will be so please check them out if you want and if you can, rate and comment please take care dude.
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