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Rated: 13+ | (4.5)
This is a very good story. I like the characters and the way the vocabulary makes Molly seem so innocent and elementary but the situations are really more than that. It will be really interesting to see how this plays out because you have set such a melancholy tone to the story that the reader is hoping for a happy ending, let alone expecting one. Just fix the spelling errors.
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