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Review by JesuCristo1950 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (4.0)
CHAOTICHARMONY,

I totally enjoyed reading your poem Unconditional Love # 1826498 # dedicated to your daughter. it was written in red and that caught my eyes in a powerful way and I was rather intrigued by the lay out of the poem which created an optical illusion of a pyrammid as each line l lenghtened increasingly so, from line to line, as the poem progressed.

The entire poem is very lyrical and rythmic and it expresses so very expertly the true definition of a mother's love for her child and by extension for the husband that she loves.

So many young persons could benefit from your poem : persons who do love but might not be aware of the selfless and continuous and ongoing and neverending and doting and protective nature of a woman's love for the child of her womb or for her adopted baby child.

Thank you poet for this to be treasured poem so beautifully expressed and in red.


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Review by JesuCristo1950 Author IconMail Icon
Rated: E | (3.0)
AN EXCELLENT POEM OF VERY DEEP INSIGHT. THE LOVER IS APPARENTLY NOT THE POET HERSELF BUT A MERMAID AT THE BOTTOM OF THE SEA. i LIKE IT AND i RATE IT A 4.00


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