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Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
Hey Pal,

I don't know what kind a game this is, but leaving off on a cliffhanger like that is just plain cruel! I love this. But then, I'm a sucker for a good anthropology/adventure/mystery, Indy-in-the-Amazon type story.

There were a couple of minor grammatical errors; run-on sentences, missing commas, too many commas, blah blah blah. These things can be fixed easily. Like, after you write another installment.

Please.

Thanks,

JessLynn
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