Hehe, this story was amazing! I love how you described everything in the second paragraph, and I liked how it was pretty funny, and how when the little girl saw and picked up the small kitten, I didn't expect the kitten to say; "Moo."
I honestly loved this story, made me smile and laugh. I hope to read more from you, and please keep up the great work! :)
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