This has to be one of the cutest poems I've ever read. I really like the french at the end, I thought it made your poem a thousand times better. I really like all the rhyming in the poem, as well. I hope it works out for you two :) Over all, I just really enjoyed this poem. Good work and thank you for sharing it :D
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