Hahahaha!!! I was laughing all the way through this. I am a Stargate SG-1 fan and could see them all having this conversion at the briefing table at SG-1 head quarters. This was great! Thanks for sharing :^)
Awesome!!!! Inspirational!! May I share this will my non-writing.com Christian friends?? I would liked to email them this poem but don't want to cross on any forbidden lines.
This story shows you have a good imagination, you are able to take something of old and put a nice "new" twist in. The only thing that I am confused about is Miles' age. The conversations that he has with his sister makes me believe that he is older than four years. Other than that, nice job.
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