just as good as the chapter 2. I still cant find the first, but never the less, this one was great. You really SHOW and dont TELL, which is great. It really put me in the story. YOur vocabulary was also deep and advanced, if you will. all in all, you are creating a GREAT story here, and i hope you keep adding on.
AWESOME! i couldnt find chapter one, but i will continue to search, if it is there? anyways, i really liked this story. Really it was the way you added such in depth details, such as the colored tiles on the table, or the rental car with the hertz plate. They were great additions and details like that really make stories great. I cant wait to read chapter 3.
This was a really intresting word search. Ive said this before, I really like people making word searches that are based on things they love. i can relate to your pain of losing your chickens, as i lost a dog when i was young, and i think its great you put your love into this word search. Keep up the great work!
This was pretty cool. I was stumped on a few of them, but i had alot of fun doing it. Its good to see people still appreciate the good old days of amazing, quality films, songs, tv shows, etc. I have to say im glad you made this crossword because it was a fun one to try out and i was challenging.
keep up the good work!
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