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Review of Upon Waking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
i like this. u can feel the emotion. the wanting. its good.
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Review of In a Single Room  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
this is really good. u can feel the emotion in that. feeling alone, i feel like that sometimes.
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Review of Kisses  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
this is good. but in the beginning where it says the best thing about being in love. the kisses. i think that it could be worded different.
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Review of Thinking  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.5)
that is good. but my life is just a dream is a little cliche. but its really good.
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Review of Poems  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
i like this, u can feel the emotion. missing someone is hard.
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Review of Reach Out  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.0)
i like this, but i do not like the part about giving food. its messes up wit the sad feeling.
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Review of Ready Or Not.  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (3.0)
I personally really do like this. The repeating of ready or not was in there very well. its easy to relate to, especially if you have lost someone.
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Review of Deep Rooted  Open in new Window.
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Rated: E | (2.5)
I don't like that it repeats Deep Rooted. I like that, its heart touching. You can feel the emotion, and how much she really loves and cares for her father. I kinda like the bible verse at the end, but...
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