I fell in to the flow of this piece even before I read your note to raters and reviewiers. I had so many flashes from my own life as I read through it. I truly enjoyed it.
I am not familiar with being critical of this type of writing so I am not sure what to offer in the form of improvement. I think from a novice's eye you are on the right track.
After reading this, I feel loved, respected and well wished. What a great read after a long few days. I get a fantastic picture in my head of strolling through an open field with Lilacs, tall grass, a soft wind and sparkling sunshine. Excellent blessing!
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