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Review by L.E. Rose Author IconMail Icon
Rated: 13+ | (4.0)
This was really good, sent a chill down my spine! It was a little jolting in the middle where the rhythm was interrupted. I felt it needed a bit more description of what was happening, maybe a bigger build up of tension before hand? I really liked the way he ran from room to room and the reader got a bit lost in his panic as they were unsure what was going to happen next or if he was even going to get out.
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