I have this type of thought once in awhile, where do we go when we die.
What will be our punishments, since nothing is clear.
We try to understand but we just have to live with regret and living up to difficult decisions. I really like this poem!
This story is very good in my option, I enjoyed it very much.
I love how the mother acted in this story, she never left her son's side.
She was worried and I felt that.
I like the part when they get out of the tank and she see's yellow tape saying "Do Not Cross." And the flashing lights. It felt like I was actually there.
you are very good at description. This is an amazing story that made me feel anxious and worried. Mother instincts kicked in within me while I read this.
I enjoyed ever second of reading this story, I might even read this a second time.
This is the type of stories I love to read.
Very interesting, I am not smart with history.
But this got my interest and I absorbed all the information you gave to me.
I found it fascinating and amazing.
I really like this peace, please keep writing.
I can't wait to hear more.
A very strong message that should be spread out, many people may find this handy.
Its very helpful to people that do need it.
I seen many people give up, I must admit I gave up a few times too.
I love this message and this is something that will stay with me for a long time.
This is amazing, very different from other stories I read.
I like it how you changed the color of the text, I don't see that often.
This story is very well told, and makes me feel nice and warm reading it.
It makes me want to read it to my little brothers to put them to bed, stories like this is very special.
This poem is very touching, I felt a lot of emotions.
I just read a little and your words kept me going.
I loved how you worded everything.
You have a great talent, This was very touching to read.
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