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Review of Loneliness  Open in new Window.
Rated: 18+ | (4.5)
I liked this a LOT. Sharp and crisp, strong imagery, clear intent and emotional content. I knocked the half point because the meter felt (to me) like you cheated for the form dictated by the prompt. You used semi-colons to keep it on the same line when it reads in my head like they are seperate lines.

GOOD POEM!
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Review of Stolen Birthday  Open in new Window.
Rated: E | (2.5)
Cute concept. Needs significant tightening to be effective. Don't give up on it...
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