I really like this one, and it is very relatable. I often am drawn to nature... I feel more at peace and like things have more meaning.I do some of my best work when I am outside. My favorite line by far is "I see my reflection in the water, more natural than a mirror" Really deep stuff there. My only criticism if you would call it that is really to include more. Its just a personal preference because it is harder to review for me personally unless there is a little more to it. Again great job though and I hope we can continue reviewing each other's work in the future!
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