I really like the contrast of the post and how you use different meanings of different words. My favorite line, "broken hearts leave you too," is a very powerful line because it shows that although you were, as you said, feeling down, you are still able to move on eventually from your broken heart, giving a sense of hope through your words. I really liked this poem - keep writing!!
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