This sounds, oh so familiar Charlie, like me in my younger days. I love your descriptiveness and your comparison of the water smashing against your chest. We do learn our route eventually or at least learn to bypass the wall and kick our feet in the ocean rather than than the water an assault on you. Thanks for sharing. Keep writing.
I think it is wonderful to hear all the things that you are not embarrased about. I think it would also be great for you to own up to those qualities that make you a decent young man, perhaps by using the words "I am proud of", in some instances. It feels a little like you are still thinking that others (in this case I would guess your peers) are still giving you the impression that you you should be embarrassed and you are defending yourself. It sounds like you are a very wise young man that has made some good choices. Keep up the good grades. You have plenty of time to get involved in a physical relationship with someone and waiting until college is not such a bad idea, if thats what you want. I am an avid reader as well, that is another thing for you to be proud of and I hope you are! Keep Writing!!!
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