OK I am not going to give this a great review because you just gave me one, but because you had me smiling half way through and laughing at the end, not an easy task i promise! keep it up!
JT
wow where to begin, i can feel the regret and at one point when you write of the voices surrounding i feel like i am in casket at a wake or funeral with those voices talking kindness, regret, meaningless thoughts to a dead man who cannot turn back the clock. and being abondoned by purpose and reality feeling the veil begin to cloud his memories, its all there, great description!
i am new to this site and only have one poem listed but would appreciate your feedback, good or bad! Thanks for the poem and cheers!
JT
I dont ever realize the exact difference between poetry and prose myself, but what I read from you is clear and concise and painted a picture in my mind which is what poets can sometimes capture, dont sell yourself short and dont belittle the art of "labouring with words" this labor usually brings about an indestructible foundation.
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